A Saving Memento Pg8

It's been quite some time since I last uploaded a page for my comic (mainly due to never ending uni assessments and computers that don't know how to behave themselves ) but here is Page 8 at long last! After the feedback that I got on my work at the Sydney Supanova convention, I tried to give more contrast between tones and I think it's turned out pretty well for the most part.

I still need to improve a lot more when it comes to anatomy and I feel the panel designs could have benefited from a bit more thought, especially with regards to leaving more space for the text In addition I felt that the background of the bottom panel might have benefited from a bit less detail to give the impression that the wall was further away.

Tools:

- Canson illustration paper
- 2B Pencil
- Artline 0.6
- Faber-Castell Pen 0.2 Black
- Faber-Castell Pen Cold Grey III
- Faber-Castell Pen Cold Gray VI

- Brightness adjusted in Photoshop
- Text added in Photoshop

- Page reads right to left

Please feel free to critique!